Craft Compelling Admissions Essays That Tell Your Story
I help you uncover the things that make you…you. Even without a life changing story, uncommon topics that are truly unique to you can make surprisingly compelling essays.
About Me
I know firsthand what it takes to craft an application that stands out because I've lived the process myself. I was one of very few students from public universities (three out of 120) selected for the Schwarzman Scholarship (3.7% acceptance rate). I draw on my own experience winning one of the most competitive scholarship programs in the world without the traditional advantages or resources of an Ivy league school.
I'm passionate about what I do because I remember what it was like to be in your shoes. Both the anxiety and the breakthroughs when crafting the essays are recent memories for me. The experience taught me what makes an exceptional essay: not just accomplishments, but an authentic story, a genuine connection between personal experiences to larger ambitions, and demonstrated self-awareness.
Most importantly, the experience has taught me how to best support people going through the process, because I've been there myself.
My Approach
A personalized, supportive process to help you tell your unique story
Great college essays don't always require extraordinary experiences. They require honest reflection and a willingness to share what genuinely matters to you. I help you discover those stories and bring them to life.
Even if you're not the strongest writer, I help coach you on the style that suits you best, and fits with your strengths, skills and abilities.
Writing about yourself is vulnerable work. I create a supportive environment where you can take risks, receive honest feedback, and develop genuine confidence in your voice and your story.
What Students Say
Hear from students who achieved their college dreams
"Of everyone I sought help from, James gave the best coaching. Other people just improved my writing. James actually coached me on how to express something that felt real, which consequently led to a really good essay. He helped me reframe my experiences and uncover insights I'm not sure I could have accessed on my own."
"I was totally stuck trying to connect different parts of my story. James asked questions that helped me find the thread running through everything. Once I had that, the whole essay came together."
"James made this so much easier than I thought it would be. I knew I wanted to write about my time living in Mexico City but had no clue how to talk about that without sounding unoriginal. He helped me find an angle that actually felt authentic to me, not like I was trying too hard. Super grateful for his help!"
"I thought my essay was already pretty good when I came to James. He showed me how to go deeper, identifying specific moments and details that strengthened my narrative in ways I hadn't considered. His feedback was precise and actionable."
Free Resources
Helpful guides and tips to get you started on your essay journey
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